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And the last head screw for today is....

January 30th 2007 03:45
babyzayf
All animals appreciate 'Something'

Had enough yet? Didnt think so.
SOMETHING
The mirror is cracked
the universe expands

The people are smashed,
with open hands.

Perspective narrows to one little rock
drawing it further near,

"Just to have a little look,
how is my little dear?"

Instantly the screams reach fever pitch
"Life has done us wrong!"

This news gives god a stitch,
he was expecting a song!

He stays, and tries to soothe,
even gets his wife to have a try

but, despite it all, it will not run smooth
leaving them both to cry.

The mirror is cracked, it will not reflect,
the universe expands, to forever, into nothing,

We are damned if we do not respect
the way we came into Something

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Comment by Lilla

January 30th 2007 05:56
K,

I enjoyed this poem too, and will go for the trifecta on comments today, since there are three poems of equal beauty to respond to ...

What a delightful ode to respect here, I really enjoy your words and the way you arrange them ... delightful!

L ..

Comment by Kleonaptra

January 31st 2007 02:27
I thank you Lilla. I love your words and your name even has a special meaning for me. I guess to some people Im coming off a bit spiky...But its all supposed to be just a righteous joke!!

Comment by Anonymous

February 17th 2007 02:47
this picture is a dream. You should sell it

Comment by Kleonaptra

February 18th 2007 22:03
Thankyou anonymous.
Every photo I have taken of my little Zayfir on his first day has recieved similar accolades. Is it that yard? The boy himself? His mother serenely in the background? I dont know, but every photo of him on his first day has been praised! One named 'Zayfirs first day' is actually for sale on picture.com. Dont worry, I have more!

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