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Kalikapsychosis - " All I see is 6 billion lunatics looking for the fastest ride out. Who's not crazy? Look around. Everyone's drinking, smoking, shooting up, shooting each other, or just plain screwing their brains out....Cos they don't want 'em anymore. I'm Crazy? Honey, I'm the original one eyed chicklet in the Kingdom of the blind, cos at least I admit the world makes me nuts." - Glory

GraveYard

April 28th 2008 01:03
The Night seems to walk.
Never hurried like the day,
yet restless still,
It moves.

Monoliths rise about,
stark pillars of stone
moonlit
gravemarkers.

And shrink....To cemetary stones,
no kings here,
or men of noble rank,
endless lines of noone.....

Nobody here and no body there,
where these bodies lie
endless rows of bodies....
Nobody.

Despite the chill of decay,
and murmur of restless spirits,
(full of regrets
they wish their stories told,

but never to be heard....)
still all I see is headstones,
gravestones,
markers.

So beautiful they be,
finely crafted,
gothic and
lovely,

yet they make me sad,
not for the bodies -
who are they to me?
Yet Gravestones....

(markers)
may mark the death of ideas,
dreams,
nightmares,

And in the walking, purposeful night,
theres nothing but dead dreams,
and painful future,
and Gravestones.....

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Comment by tlcorbin

April 28th 2008 02:06
Hmmm, dark fatalism here kleo, interesting.

Raven

Comment by Kleonaptra

April 28th 2008 23:36
Yep, I think so too Raven, The sketch muse seems to have gone on holiday and left me with the poetry one.

Comment by tlcorbin

April 29th 2008 03:21
At least you aren't alone and muse less kleo.

Raven

Comment by Kleonaptra

April 29th 2008 05:04
Ah, I dont think that ever happens Raven, always inspired for one artistic outlet or another....

Comment by Lilla

April 29th 2008 05:58
Hi Kleo,


I love these lines...

The Night seems to walk.
Never hurried like the day,
yet restless still,
It moves.


Dark, Mysterious ... and religious?

Lilla ...

Comment by Neems

April 29th 2008 07:18
Very dark...and superbly written. I love this.

Neems

Comment by Kleonaptra

April 29th 2008 22:55
Lilla,
Not intended to be religious, but I like that you interpreted it that way. Oo we could really rip poetry apart for hours couldnt we! Now Im seeing new things.

Wait for 'Trickle' coming up today. My crowning achievement so far!

Neems
Great to meet you, thanks so much for your comment, Im always stoked when people enjoy my stuff.

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