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Kalikapsychosis - "Perfection is what its about. When you can feel, the perfection, of creation. The beauty of physics, the wonder of mathematics all the elation of action, and reaction, and that is the kind of perfection that I want to be connected to" - Sam, hooked into the data stream

KNOW YOU EMPTY DEVILS

July 17th 2007 02:38
I dont mind being out and about,
how I wish -

It was on my terms
so much has been,

Ive made sure of that
but still so much

Left unexplored by me
unturned yet defiled.

Train clicks, clacks,
my mind says snap snap

Oh you empty devils!
You Zombies -

thoughtless, mindless
suggestions of human beings

What will you do? When he comes for you
What will you say? When he sees you

For if you do not believe in existance
your own is forfeit

and I hate you empty devils,
yet love your full souls.

Amoungst your empty eyes
I realize how alive I am

though I dream of death
and make love to cold


In 'Lisey's Story' King makes quite a few refrences to 'empty devils'. Its a concept taken from shakespeare - "Hell is empty and the devils are here" and its not something that can be explained thoroughly. Its a concept, a feeling. Im fascinated with it as I am with 'the long boy'. King has managed to personify certain things and so, I can get my head around them much better than before.

Theres nothing in me at the moment but pain and hope. I hope that all this has meaning - I pray that my vast and boundless energy is being sapped for a damn good reason, and soon it will all be in absolution. That the next level will be reached and they will prove me ultimately right and ultimately wrong at the same time.

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Comment by katyzzz

July 17th 2007 07:49
The ebb and flow of like, Kleo, don't 'thinks too much' and after a hectic period one can expect a rebound of inactivity.

Luvs ya,

katyzzz......got my room ready?

Comment by missnomer

July 17th 2007 08:13
Empty devils...zombies...sounds like Big Brother 07 to me
x

Comment by Nickoftime's Sanity Corner

July 17th 2007 12:47
Kleo,

great poem...did you do this or King? Was a tad confused...

If you did it, it's a great piece!

Take care,

Nick

Comment by Kleonaptra

July 18th 2007 00:39
Katyzzz,
Im still figuring out where to put you. Ive been thinking about it
Miss nomer,
Hehe. I love big Brother but I have to agree with you there!
Nick,
Oh, yeah, its mine! Sorry for the confusion, thanks for the compliment!

Comment by Wendi

July 22nd 2007 12:19
Kleo -

I relate so frigging well to your poetry... I love the way you express your innermost thoughts so openly, and with such raw emotion.

This is my favorite segment:

thoughtless, mindless
suggestions of human beings

I feel that way more often than I'd like to admit these days.

And this bit?

Theres nothing in me at the moment but pain and hope. I hope that all this has meaning - I pray that my vast and boundless energy is being sapped for a damn good reason, and soon it will all be in absolution. That the next level will be reached and they will prove me ultimately right and ultimately wrong at the same time.

Same page... same time.... ~connected~.

Excellent write.

W


Comment by Kleonaptra

July 22nd 2007 14:16
Thanks Wendi love. Im in a very strange place right now....But its familiar, at least

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