Life is a Shambles
December 10th 2007 04:48
Life is a shambles,
but without the comfort,
of slowly....
Rusting...Corrugated iron,
against tall weeds,
as water drips from the roof.
Such a shack as this,
most call a shambles,
where I see,
perfectly ordered disorder.
Every resting bucket,
frayed rope,
and fallen paling,
has its place and purpose,
use and responsability.
Certainly more order,
than this......
Shambles.
but without the comfort,
of slowly....
Rusting...Corrugated iron,
against tall weeds,
as water drips from the roof.
Such a shack as this,
most call a shambles,
where I see,
perfectly ordered disorder.
Every resting bucket,
frayed rope,
and fallen paling,
has its place and purpose,
use and responsability.
Certainly more order,
than this......
Shambles.
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Comment by Ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
There is beauty in everything isn`t there? It just depends how ones eyes see it.
but without the comfort,
of slowly....
Rusting...Corrugated iron,
against tall weeds,
as water drips from the roof.
I love this imagery!
Ash
Comment by Kleonaptra
Kalikapsychosis
Pleasure to see you as always.....Im glad we could (yet again) connect on common ground.
Ash,
Yeah, I did alright there didnt I? Lately poetry's just been coming thick and fast, and theyre just coming out short and sweet.
Denied a few million, this shack is my dream house...Im glad you can see it so clearly.