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Some Poetry

January 30th 2007 03:12
Spider
Just hangin out...
Your text goes here
You know, I feel so safe here. No ones reading me, so I can just crap on all I like, put up my mostly hopeless poetry, and never get negative feedback!
Until
Twisted fates,
Hardened gates,

how we hurt!
are you so curt?

Up and up the flames go,
up so far, you dont know -

All of beauty, misery and despair,
is simply because of care,

I want to know why pain
the simple answer is gain

but in something innocent and true
why should that make blue?

Something perfect, untouched, beautiful
can turn love decietful.

Aaah, yes, you fickle, filthy bitch!
Now theres what makes us twitch!

Do I speak to the Goddess Fate?
Or Aphrodite, her careless mate?

Doesnt matter - they're both hard,
sometimes turned by the odd bard,

to look down upon and see
human beings just want to be free!

We want love&lust and pleasure(mostly love)
and cannot understand why those above

have decreed an awful thing,
love can only pain bring.

So many of us howl NOOO!!
at the injustice, but it is so

Man and woman in constant hate
do not laugh - it is thy fate

turn and turn and once again turn
it will only make you want to burn,

Burn you shall and burn you will
that is all the fate there is - Until

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Comment by JohnDoe

January 30th 2007 03:19
Burn baby burn, I like it....just thought I would pay you the courtesy of dropping by after your thoughtful comments on my blog...

Comment by katyzzz

January 30th 2007 03:40
K [ I like that initial ]

Love the spider,

You must delete 'your text goes here'

You sound like a lover scorned,

move on before you burn

unless masochism gives you your fix,

everything has its own price,

the price of freedom is not PAIN,

so arise that you may live again,

and once again turn your angst thoughts,

into a just so pretty verse.

Love accepts longing and sexual fulfillment but does not tolerate lust,

Here endeth the first lesson, and you'll see you're no longer alone.

katyzzz

Comment by Kleonaptra

January 30th 2007 04:06
Thanks dudes! Good to know someones listening...But you should all know I really, really, hate poetry...If you like it, Mr Garrett, my high school english teacher, is to blame, he was always pushing me to be a poet, even though my first love is short stories.
And yeah, katyzzz, Im slowly working that stuff out...Cant you tell Im software challenged?

Comment by David

January 30th 2007 04:41
I was going to comment on your poem ... but excuse me while I vomit at the sanctimonious holier-than-thou comment ... ************ and pathetic attempt at vote-soliciting poetry ... ********

Comment by Lilla

January 30th 2007 05:38
Kleonaptra,

I like your poem and wonder do you post it to prove your English teacher wrong, or right?

Personally, I think it's good, he was right!
but I'm no expert..

Cheers
Lilla

Comment by Brian

January 30th 2007 07:53
Very touching poetry. While I love reading, composing poems has been my waterloo. Hope I can get some more inspiring compositions here.

Warm Regards

Comment by Kleonaptra

January 31st 2007 02:22
David! Why? Vote soliciting? I thought we were becoming buddies, whats the go? The whole point of starting this ridiculous blog(does anyone else hate that term) was just to vent my spleen, I never expected anyone to read or like it...Call me whatever you like mate, Im beginning to think we have similar volitile personalities...

Comment by Kleonaptra

January 31st 2007 04:40
Lilla,
Lets just say I may be turning to my old teachers way of thinking...I usually mention him just cos I know hes on the big bad web somewhere, maybe he'll recognise me and edit my work again! I never write to prove anything, I just pour out what comes.

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