Some Poetry
January 30th 2007 03:12
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You know, I feel so safe here. No ones reading me, so I can just crap on all I like, put up my mostly hopeless poetry, and never get negative feedback!
You know, I feel so safe here. No ones reading me, so I can just crap on all I like, put up my mostly hopeless poetry, and never get negative feedback!
Until
Twisted fates,
Hardened gates,
how we hurt!
are you so curt?
Up and up the flames go,
up so far, you dont know -
All of beauty, misery and despair,
is simply because of care,
I want to know why pain
the simple answer is gain
but in something innocent and true
why should that make blue?
Something perfect, untouched, beautiful
can turn love decietful.
Aaah, yes, you fickle, filthy bitch!
Now theres what makes us twitch!
Do I speak to the Goddess Fate?
Or Aphrodite, her careless mate?
Doesnt matter - they're both hard,
sometimes turned by the odd bard,
to look down upon and see
human beings just want to be free!
We want love&lust and pleasure(mostly love)
and cannot understand why those above
have decreed an awful thing,
love can only pain bring.
So many of us howl NOOO!!
at the injustice, but it is so
Man and woman in constant hate
do not laugh - it is thy fate
turn and turn and once again turn
it will only make you want to burn,
Burn you shall and burn you will
that is all the fate there is - Until
Hardened gates,
how we hurt!
are you so curt?
Up and up the flames go,
up so far, you dont know -
All of beauty, misery and despair,
is simply because of care,
I want to know why pain
the simple answer is gain
but in something innocent and true
why should that make blue?
Something perfect, untouched, beautiful
can turn love decietful.
Aaah, yes, you fickle, filthy bitch!
Now theres what makes us twitch!
Do I speak to the Goddess Fate?
Or Aphrodite, her careless mate?
Doesnt matter - they're both hard,
sometimes turned by the odd bard,
to look down upon and see
human beings just want to be free!
We want love&lust and pleasure(mostly love)
and cannot understand why those above
have decreed an awful thing,
love can only pain bring.
So many of us howl NOOO!!
at the injustice, but it is so
Man and woman in constant hate
do not laugh - it is thy fate
turn and turn and once again turn
it will only make you want to burn,
Burn you shall and burn you will
that is all the fate there is - Until
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Comment by JohnDoe
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Comment by katyzzz
Photography Tips
MS Paint Art
Love the spider,
You must delete 'your text goes here'
You sound like a lover scorned,
move on before you burn
unless masochism gives you your fix,
everything has its own price,
the price of freedom is not PAIN,
so arise that you may live again,
and once again turn your angst thoughts,
into a just so pretty verse.
Love accepts longing and sexual fulfillment but does not tolerate lust,
Here endeth the first lesson, and you'll see you're no longer alone.
katyzzz
Comment by Kleonaptra
Kalikapsychosis
And yeah, katyzzz, Im slowly working that stuff out...Cant you tell Im software challenged?
Comment by David
Comment by Lilla
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Enviro Warrior
Dream Herald
Esoteric Bookshop
I like your poem and wonder do you post it to prove your English teacher wrong, or right?
Personally, I think it's good, he was right!
but I'm no expert..
Cheers
Lilla
Comment by Brian
Warm Regards
Comment by Kleonaptra
Kalikapsychosis
Comment by Kleonaptra
Kalikapsychosis
Lets just say I may be turning to my old teachers way of thinking...I usually mention him just cos I know hes on the big bad web somewhere, maybe he'll recognise me and edit my work again! I never write to prove anything, I just pour out what comes.