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Kalikapsychosis - " All I see is 6 billion lunatics looking for the fastest ride out. Who's not crazy? Look around. Everyone's drinking, smoking, shooting up, shooting each other, or just plain screwing their brains out....Cos they don't want 'em anymore. I'm Crazy? Honey, I'm the original one eyed chicklet in the Kingdom of the blind, cos at least I admit the world makes me nuts." - Glory

THE LAST AVATAR

February 6th 2007 05:37
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Blood of Gods...

Mad and alone, the Last Avatar stands,
looking at her bloody hands,

all her companions dead and gone,
her anger at a sharp hone.

Where to look, where to go?
Is there no more to and fro?

All the things the gods ever said,
only make her see more red,

cos now, promises they cant keep,
an Avatar who cannot sleep.

Powers of Gods all have waned
she feels as if she were caned,

but if the punishment is all in her head,
does that mean they are all dead?

surely, one such as her, they cant ignore
of this, she is completely sure,

so, then, where are they?
those who moulded men from clay?

screams of humans go unheard,
cries of Gods fly like birds

but there is no answer, no why
and with this knowledge, spirits die.

"How could you do this to me!
We were all completely free!"

The Avatar screams in rage
her physical body is like a cage.

she will continue to rage, and burn,
her mind long ago did turn

forever on she will reach,
until their sanctity, she does breach.

Unless they are no longer there....
In which case, what does she dare?....


To my unofficial friends - Lilla, Katyzz, Ash, Wendi, David, Lily and any faithful others, my broodmare just escaped! I promise I will comment on you all tomorrow when I have her safely restrained!

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Comment by Wendi

February 7th 2007 04:46
Oh, I relate to your writings more than I can express. I cannot tell you how many times I've climbed to astral mountain tops to curse out those who I felt abandoned me... us... humanity. Some of my very best writings happen when I'm incredibly pissed off or terribly wounded (not necessarily physically).

Here's to the horse's free spirit! *raises goblet*


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